Drama Script –
Outcome
Here is the final script prepared for the shoot, it gave us a base to work from and we would change a few things as we went along so it made the film better and the actors more comfortable.
ACT 1 – From Summers Viewpoint
Summer is walking down the street, present in hand, she is walking
briskly, clearly distressed and upset about something. Out of focus and in the
background we see a man peel away from the scene…
The camera cuts to a note on the
present it reads…
“To Nick…”
Summer is rushing now, we can hear a voice shouting…
“SUMMER!!!!”
Summer begins to cross the road she is looking down at the present
(letter), she drops the present in the road.
She hesitates as she is clearly bothered by something that has happened,
as if in shock the sound drains from the scene and Summer is disorientated
(shellshock) as she goes to pick it up.
Then suddenly we hear loud car screeching and BANG, she is hit by a
car.
Cut to black…
ACT 2 – From Nicks Viewpoint
Nick leaves a house through the tunnel passage… rearranging his
clothes, pauses has a puff on his cigarette and flicks it on the floor. A woman
shouts…
Woman – “YOU’RE A FUCKING BASTARD!!”
Gets into his car he begins driving, no seatbelt, he is clearly
distracted and irresponsible…
Nick’s phone rings…it’s Tom
Nick – “Hey, man”
Tom – “I’ve done it mate..”
Nick – “WHAT DO YOU MEAN?!”
Tom – “I’ve told her.”
Nick – “ARE YOU FUCKING SERIOUS!?”
Tom – “She had to know…”
Nick – “BOLLOCKS SHE HAD TO KNOW, YOU’VE HAD YOUR EYES ON
HER SINCE THE FUCKING START!!”
Tom – “DON’T BE LIKE THIS MAN, YOU’RE IN THE WRONG AND YOU
KNOW IT”
NICK – “I’M COMING UP TO YOURS NOW, LETS SORT THIS SHIT OUT…”
Nick hangs up, swearing under his breath, clearly annoyed and is not
paying attention to the road, he flips out, hitting the steering wheel…
“FUCK, NO, NO”
Nick looks at the phone again, and tries to scroll to Summer’s name to
ring her…
As he is looking down at the phone we see he is not looking at the
road, as he looks up he is shocked and we see his reaction through the
windscreen.
ACT 3 – From Tom’s Viewpoint
Tom and Summer approach in the street and hug, we see Tom’s face
smiling slightly, he clearly likes her.
Summer – “Tom, you okay?”
Tom – “Yeah I’m fine Summer… special occasion?” (looking at the present)
Summer – “Oh, this…no it’s just a little something I picked
up for Nick”
Tom – “Yeah…I’ve been meaning to see you about that, there’s
something you need to know…”
Summer - “What, why what’s wrong.”
Pause – 5 seconds – Close up on Tom
Tom – “It’s Nick… I don’t know how to say this… so I just
will… he’s been cheating”
Summer - “…Shut up Tom…don’t mess about”
Tom – “I’m sorry…you don’t deserve this Summer…”
Tom reaches for Summer’s hand
Summer – “TOM, GET OFF ME…”
Summer turns away, shocked
Tom – “SUMMER, I’m trying to do the right thing…”
Summer storms away, Tom starts to follow but then stops and turns away,
he pulls out his phone and rings Nick.
We now see the conversation from ACT 2 but from Tom’s perspective.
Nick – “Hey, man”
Tom – “I’ve done it mate..”
Nick – “WHAT DO YOU MEAN?!”
Tom – “I’ve told her.”
Nick – “ARE YOU FUCKING SERIOUS!?”
Tom – “She had to know…”
Nick – “BOLLOCKS SHE HAD TO KNOW, YOU’VE HAD YOUR EYES ON
HER SINCE THE FUCKING START!!”
Tom – “DON’T BE LIKE THIS MAN, YOU’RE IN THE WRONG AND YOU
KNOW IT”
NICK – “I’M COMING UP TO YOURS NOW, LETS SORT THIS SHIT OUT
NOW…”
The phone goes dead, Nick has hung up… Tom pauses is in thought for a
second.
Tom hears a roaring car go past, he recognises it as Nick, as he turns
he sees what is about to happen, the car collides with Summer. (this will be
slowed down to see Tom’s reaction”)
Cut to black
ACT 4 – Whole viewpoint
From ACT 1 – the scene will start from when Summer drops the present
(letter) in the road.
Nick looks up and sees the woman in the middle of the road about to be
hit, Summer looks around and sees the car about to hit her.
We will see the crash from a side view.
Tom looks around just as the crash happens, we see his reaction
From the floor under the car blood is dripping from the grill, Nick
falls out of the car door, sees a body motionless on the floor.
He stumbles, we can see the car hazards flashing in the background, she
is breathing very slowly. He realises it is Summer…
Tom runs over to Summer as this happens.
Tom tries help her as Nick lies in shock.
Tom (to Nick)
“HELP…NICK…HELP”
Cut to a flashback of Summer and Nick (maybe)
Slow low pan up the body, with Tom lying with her seeing the chest
breathing…slowly… then stops… (if it is the letter she dropped earlier we will
see this and a sonogram next to the body, suggesting she was pregnant)
Cut to black.